The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart compares the amount of free
time
per
week
that males and females of five
categories
of employment status had between 1998 and 1999.
It is clear that
men enjoyed more
hours
of
leisure
time
per
week
than
women
in three out of five
categories
.
However
, only figures for
women
were shown in two
categories
, namely employed part-
time
and housewives. Regarding the full-
time
employed,
obviously
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men had slightly more
leisure
time
than
women
, with approximately 45
hours
of free
time
per
week
, compared to around 38
hours
for
women
. Obviously, unemployed and retired people of both genders enjoyed the most
hours
of
leisure
time
.
Moreover
, the figures for retired males and females were exactly the same as those for the unemployed, at around 85 and 78
hours
of free
time
per
week
, respectively. Housewives enjoyed 50
hours
of spare
time
, a little more than part-
time
working
women
who had just over 40
leisure
hours
each
week
. No data is given for men in either of these
categories
.
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