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you want to sell of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter, explain why are you selling describe the furniture suggest a date when your friend come and see the furniture

#furniture #friend #date
Dear Rakesh, I hope you are doing well. I am sorry
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 since I moved to Canada I lost touch with you. But, recently I met your sister Anita at a party and got to know about your new job. She said, that you have joined one of the leading software companies in Toronto, as
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 software developer. I am so happy
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 your success and excited to meet you. Since you have moved in two months back, I think you must be looking for some decorative furnishings for your house. I know you have a big family and if just in case you are looking for a dining table, please feel free to contact me. Actually, I am getting married in
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 three months, so I need to shift my belongings to Ottawa.
Moreover
, after marriage, I will be staying with my husband in Ottawa.
Although
, I will try to shift maximum items,
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still it is very difficult for me to carry
this
 delicate dining table.
Last
 year, there was a huge exhibition of furniture. It was
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basically organised by an Indian couple. During, that exhibition, I got fascinated by
this
 elegant and exquisite piece of art. It's not like just any ordinary furniture, but a stunning piece of work. The workmanship done has been inspired by Mughal Dynasty, I am sure you will definitely like to buy
this
 remarkable work. If you are comfortable, we can meet on 27th March, which is basically a Saturday. You can come along with your family and take a look,
then
further
 make your decision. As far as, I know that you have always been very influenced by ancient culture and lifestyle.
Therefore
,
this
 could be the most quintessential artefact for your house. So, please do visit once and
then
 we can plan
accordingly
 how to move
this
 to your place safely. Take care and write back soon. Best Regards, Shreya
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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