you want to sell of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter, explain why are you selling describe the furniture suggest a date when your friend come and see the furniture

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Dear Rakesh, I hope you are doing well. I am sorry

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since I moved to Canada I lost touch with you. But, recently I met your sister Anita at a party and got to know about your new job. She said, that you have joined one of the leading software companies in Toronto, as

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software developer. I am so happy

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your success and excited to meet you. Since you have moved in two months back, I think you must be looking for some decorative furnishings for your house. I know you have a big family and if just in case you are looking for a dining table, please feel free to contact me. Actually, I am getting married in

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three months, so I need to shift my belongings to Ottawa.

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, after marriage, I will be staying with my husband in Ottawa.

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, I will try to shift maximum items,

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still it is very difficult for me to carry

this

delicate dining table.

Last

year, there was a huge exhibition of furniture. It was

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basically organised by an Indian couple. During, that exhibition, I got fascinated by

this

elegant and exquisite piece of art. It's not like just any ordinary furniture, but a stunning piece of work. The workmanship done has been inspired by Mughal Dynasty, I am sure you will definitely like to buy

this

remarkable work. If you are comfortable, we can meet on 27th March, which is basically a Saturday. You can come along with your family and take a look,

then

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make your decision. As far as, I know that you have always been very influenced by ancient culture and lifestyle.

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could be the most quintessential artefact for your house. So, please do visit once and

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we can plan

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how to move

this

to your place safely. Take care and write back soon. Best Regards, Shreya

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

320 words

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