Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree. 9:33-10:13

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The choice of

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varies from

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person

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and in the today hectic scheduled life

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individuals are not able to spare time for cooking,

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the demand for ready-made and unhealthy

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is high. Many argue that the law enforcement should impose high tax to reduce the intake of unhealthy meal, I do not accord with

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notion, that government can restrict the usage of these kind of meal to promote the benefits of healthy eating. The following treatise will explicit the reasons behind the same. The

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and foremost reason is that people should take care of their eating style. Nowadays, the large par portion of the masses is more concerned about the well being of them. Many critical diseases are occurring due to the unhealthy eating. By imposing high tax would not help in keeping people away from taking junk foods, ready made meal etc. To exemplify

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, It can be stated the individuals who work

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n multinational companies are left with less time or no time for cooking due to their long hours working.

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Therefore they

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prefer to rapid

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, people are earning high and could pay even high taxes on it. Another compelling argument in,

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can be that the government has other major duties to perform. They are not able to cater about the

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habits of people. Reason being it is an individual's choice of what kind of lifestyle they want to live in.

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, if see a labour who work on 200to 300 rupees wages a day could not afford the high taxes impose by the government on

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food

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a certain number of the population could not be considered in taking any strict action. To recapitulate it after contemplating, it can be stated that

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habits and choice of

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is totally depends upon the

person

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person

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and

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it is an individual's duty to cater to their health and about healthy diet for them.

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Topic Vocabulary:

unhealthy food
junk food
calorie-dense
taxing
incentivize
manufacturers
prohibitively expensive
disproportionately
low-income households
healthcare costs
obesity
diet-related diseases
punitive measures
lifestyle choices
government intervention
food industry
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