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Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree. 9:33-10:13

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The choice of
food
 varies from
person
 to
person
 and in the today hectic scheduled life
,
Accept space
,
 individuals are not able to spare time for cooking,
therefore
 the demand for ready-made and unhealthy
food
 is high. Many argue that the law enforcement should impose high tax to reduce the intake of unhealthy meal, I do not accord with
this
 notion, that government can restrict the usage of these kind of meal to promote the benefits of healthy eating. The following treatise will explicit the reasons behind the same. The
first
 and foremost reason is that people should take care of their eating style. Nowadays, the large par portion of the masses is more concerned about the well being of them. Many critical diseases are occurring due to the unhealthy eating. By imposing high tax would not help in keeping people away from taking junk foods, ready made meal etc. To exemplify
this
, It can be stated the individuals who work
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 n multinational companies are left with less time or no time for cooking due to their long hours working.
Therefore they
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Therefore, they
 prefer to rapid
food
.
Moreover
, people are earning high and could pay even high taxes on it. Another compelling argument in,
this
 can be that the government has other major duties to perform. They are not able to cater about the
food
 habits of people. Reason being it is an individual's choice of what kind of lifestyle they want to live in.
For instance
, if see a labour who work on 200to 300 rupees wages a day could not afford the high taxes impose by the government on
such
food
.
Therefore
 a certain number of the population could not be considered in taking any strict action. To recapitulate it after contemplating, it can be stated that
food
 habits and choice of
food
 is totally depends upon the
person
 to
person
 and
moreover
 it is an individual's duty to cater to their health and about healthy diet for them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unhealthy food
  • junk food
  • calorie-dense
  • taxing
  • incentivize
  • manufacturers
  • prohibitively expensive
  • disproportionately
  • low-income households
  • healthcare costs
  • obesity
  • diet-related diseases
  • punitive measures
  • lifestyle choices
  • government intervention
  • food industry
  • economic impact
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