Museums and art galleries are past their use-by date. In modern society, culture and art are best accessed online by computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Internet
is a part of Suggestion
The internet
information
revolution which does not only allow people to connect to each other but
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other, but
also
empower people to access to an enormous mass of data. By using internet
, a person Suggestion
the internet
no longer need
to visit a Suggestion
no longer needs
museum
or art
gallery
but still able to enjoy or study
of culture
and art
which raises a question that whether the existence of museum
and art
galleries are no longer needed. In my view, museum
and art
are irreplaceable and they shall continously
keep a crucial role in society for a long time.
at every point
continuously
Firstly
, it is obvious that enjoying art
and culture
in museum
or Suggestion
a museum
the museum
gallery
brings multidimensional multisensory
experience to the guests. Suggestion
multi sensory
This
means that a guest could obtain more memorable experience in art
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an art gallery
gallery
than simply looking at a picture online. Attending at exhibition room, the visitors are able to observe details and textures of the artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
artefact
then
discuss to
each other about what they are Suggestion
with
concerned which
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concerned, which
a
interactive and communicative environment to the visitors, the environment Suggestion
an
internet
does not offer.
Moreover
, the organisation and arrangement of artifacts
in museums or a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
art
gallaries
are systematic and effective which helps visitors take less effort to spectators at a golf or tennis match
galleries
study
. For example
, surfing and gathering random information
of
an artist on Suggestion
about
internet
must be a hard work and Suggestion
the internet
also
take time to classify or summarise information
. In contrast
, a gallery
owner would classify artworks into category
Suggestion
a category
categories
such
as year, theme, artist and each artwork is also
attached with additional information
so it can be studied in systematic way
.
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a systematic way
That is
not to say that studying culture
and art
on internet
is not beneficial. Indeed, Suggestion
the internet
internet
is an economical and convenient way to Suggestion
the internet
study
any particular field. Althought
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Although
internet
does not always bring to learner a Suggestion
the internet
reliable systematic
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reliable, systematic
information
, it is a helpful tool for seeking knowledge which can be combined with studying in museums and art
galleries for more effective study
.
In sum, visting
museums or the activity of making visits
visiting
art
galleries not only offers visitors an ideal environment to obtain knowledge but also
gives them chance
to interact with each other. Meanwhile, seeking Suggestion
a chance
the chance
information
on internet
is still a convenient way which is Suggestion
the internet
partialy
supportive for studying in in part; in some degree; not wholly
partially
partly
desirable field
. By doing so, studiers would find their own suitable ways to Suggestion
the desirable field
study
art
and culture
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