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Nowadays young people lack an understanding of how to manage their finances after they finish high school. Explain why they do not know how to manage money and how this can be changed.

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Managing finance is playing a vital role in every one’s life and young adults have a lack of
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 skill after leaving high school.
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 lack of skill is due to the upbringing they receive and academy education. Now a day most of children are dependent on their parents even at the age of high institute and they get everything free from their guardians without any restrictions. Parents want to keep their offspring happy and build their bright future, for
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 they hide the financial pressure and provide them a lot of money and children are unaware of understanding the true value of money.
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condly department s
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ubjects mathematics, science, economics does not give them lesson to understand the real world. Both parents and teachers are failing to teach children the real value of life. We need to concern
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 problem, but fortunately they are lots of solutions to overcome
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. Guardians should give them limited money and told it lasts the whole month, It will build responsibility to them to monitor their expenses and how to manage.
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, parents should allow to take the decision of the house and giving them responsibility to manage household expenditure, some time they have to allow their infants to run the house for one or two days.
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condly university s
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hould teach them subject Management in growth in their final year study. It will be beneficial for them in their future activity. They need
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 experience in almost every aspect of activity. To conclude, adults are far away from the necessary job of life, but few solutions which are mentioned above help them to understand the real world.
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