Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

These days, in the market of globalization, it is crucial to take developing nations together so that they can prosper and boost their economic strength. There are some individuals, who believe

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can be achieved through financial

support

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by international organizations. While, others contend that practical

aid

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and counselling is essential for these countries.

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essay will discuss both the arguments and provide my opinion on it. On one hand, there are some developing nations that need financial

aid

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from international bodies.

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is because, these countries are already struggling from staggering economy and poor

infrastructure

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. Some countries,

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, Nepal and Pakistan, where people are suffering from

crisis

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a crisis

the crisis

,

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as

unemployement

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

and bad health

infrastructure

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. If these countries are not funded by bodies

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as

International Monetary fund

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an International Monetary fund

, it would have

devastating effect

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a devastating effect

devastating effects

on their citizens and will deter the situation of the country.

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, it is paramount that countries, who are already suffering through

aforementioned crisis

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the aforementioned crisis

need financial help from international organizations to improve their living standards.

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, there are those developing countries, which are doing well in the areas mentioned before

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as health and

infrastructure

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. These countries require practical

aid

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and

advise

a proposal for an appropriate course of action

advice

from the observing international organizations.

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, countries like India and

China,

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China, although

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, they are considered as developing nations; they contribute not only domestic

level but

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level, but

on

international level

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an international level

the international level

as well- through the help of international bodies that provide them concessions on import and export from developed countries.

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, these countries prosper well on the latter mentioned

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from international organizations. In conclusion,

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some countries, whose financial

infrastructure

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is not strong enough and

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, need monetary

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from

international organization

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international organizations

the international organization

an international organization

. There are

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other developing nations which require practical

aid

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and

advise

a proposal for an appropriate course of action

advice

in order to boost their economic standards

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. In my opinion, both

form

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forms

of

support

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is

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are

essential, depending on the circumstances of the developing country.