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‘Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder.’ What do you think this means? Do you agree with this statement?

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Beauty
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 is in the eyes of the
beholder
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’ means that people may have differing opinions on what is beautiful.
what
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What
 is pleasing to the eyes of one
person
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 may be weird or ugly to another
person
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. In my opinion, if you know how to look, if you want to see it
in other words
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, you see
beauty
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 in everything.
it
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It
 depends on your perspective.
aesthetic
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Aesthetic
 values and perception of
beauty
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 vary from
person
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 to
person
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.
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, it can be said that
this
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 proverb has a subjective understanding of
beauty
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. Depending on the perspective and aesthetic values, its characteristics of what constitutes true
beauty
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 may differ significantly from others.
Although
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 research says that some features make us see people with those features better, there are many reasons behind how we see a
person
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for example
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; someone we love and know. Because physical appearance of a
person
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 might fade as
years
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the years
 pass on; but their characters do not.
when
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When
 people know what real
beauty
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 is, they can understand what they see
in
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on
 the outside is only a projection. What matters is the character inside.
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; when you like someone, people mostly say her/his bad physical characteristics.
contrary
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Contrary
 to what they say if a
person
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 loves someone, he/she does not care what people say. Because, as stated above
beauty
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 is in the eye
beholder
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, it changes
person
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 to
person
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. According to others, no matter how ugly that
person
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 is, she/he has a
beauty
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 for you As a conclusion,
Beauty
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 depends on the
beholder
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's mindset.
the
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The
beholder
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 has a strong individualistic taste idea of what
beauty
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 is. Because everyone's perspective is different,
beauty
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 varies from
person
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 to
person
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 and cannot be a common measure of
beauty
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.
in
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In
 conclusion
beauty
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 does in fact lie in the eyes of the
beholder
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.
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