People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

People get better jobs in being literate in English and
thus
achieve a better standard of living. I strongly agree
this
idea. Because
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is
worlds language
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a world language
world language
the world language
world's language
if you go to
abroad you
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abroad, you
need
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
for
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to
find
good job
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a good job
, good salary and education. I will follow
this
idea
next
paragraphs. Since English is the world language, it is now used everywhere. If you have a good English, you can find a good job all over the world and get a high salary. That's why a lot of people are taking world-wide exams like
toefl
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TOEFL
and
ielts
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
.
In addition
, many companies from many countries employ employees based on
toefl
Suggestion
TOEFL
and
ielts
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
scores.
On the other hand
, we need to know English not only for our working conditions to be good but
also
for our good living standards. In countries where English is widely used, even people with low wages have very good living conditions.
For example
, in Australia, Canada, America and the UK, 90% of the houses have a garden. And people can spend time in the garden. In other countries,
this
rate is 16%. Another important factor is education. If we know English, we can study at the best schools.
For example
, 198 of the top 200 universities in the world teach English.
This
shows that English is very necessary to go to a good university. To conclude, for education and better
live we
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live, we
have to learn
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
,
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,
furthermore we
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furthermore, we
need
teach
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to teach
our children.
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