People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

People get better jobs in being literate in English and

thus

achieve a better standard of living. I strongly agree

this

idea. Because

english

an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries

English

is

worlds language

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a world language

world language

the world language

world's language

if you go to

abroad you

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abroad, you

need

english

an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries

English

for

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to

find

good job

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a good job

, good salary and education. I will follow

this

idea

next

paragraphs. Since English is the world language, it is now used everywhere. If you have a good English, you can find a good job all over the world and get a high salary. That's why a lot of people are taking world-wide exams like

toefl

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TOEFL

and

ielts

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

.

In addition

, many companies from many countries employ employees based on

toefl

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TOEFL

and

ielts

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

scores.

On the other hand

, we need to know English not only for our working conditions to be good but

also

for our good living standards. In countries where English is widely used, even people with low wages have very good living conditions.

For example

, in Australia, Canada, America and the UK, 90% of the houses have a garden. And people can spend time in the garden. In other countries,

this

rate is 16%. Another important factor is education. If we know English, we can study at the best schools.

For example

, 198 of the top 200 universities in the world teach English.

This

shows that English is very necessary to go to a good university. To conclude, for education and better

live we

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live, we

have to learn

english

an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries

English

,

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,

furthermore we

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furthermore, we

need

teach

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to teach

our children.