In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays,
gap
year
becomes more popular to students in high schools and at
univetsities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
who prefer to have more experiments
.
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In my point of view, I believe
this
trend
definnitely bring
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definitely brings
definitely bring
has definitely brought
is definitely bringing
not only a lot of benefits but
also
some
backdraws
scenery hung at back of stage
backdrops
breakthroughs
. On the one hand, it is very beneficial to take a
gap
year
for high students to have better choices of beginning university studies. If students decide to have practical working, they will have to find out a lot of ways to apply to their interested work
.
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Therefore
, they will have real experiments about information
from
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about
relationships and facing obstacles in each circumstance
.
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Moreover
, they will know about what are
requirements
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the requirements
of their jobs and train themselves the characters
such
as self-esteem, self-discipline
,
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,
time management or something else. I believe
that those choose
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those that choose
to work or travel a
year
will be mature to do their
next
steps.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages that the young who take a
gap
year
can meet.
Firstly
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
in their country or going abroad takes
a mount
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an amount
amount
of money to do so that students must ensure they have a
financil
involving financial matters
financial
effort.
Secondly
, some skills which
they
of them or themselves
their
studies in high schools may be
disapeared
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappeared
diapered
or not
improvement
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an improvement
.
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.
Finally
, they need to be well-prepared about mental health because they work or travel themselves
,
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,
means that they will face the difficulties without help
.
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.
In conclusion, there are pros and cons for young people to make decisions forr their future and I consider that a
gap
year
is a good choice for whom have a capacity to do alone
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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