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In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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Nowadays,
gap
year
 becomes more popular to students in high schools and at
univetsities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
 who prefer to have more experiments
.
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.
 In my point of view, I believe
this
 trend
definnitely bring
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definitely brings
definitely bring
has definitely brought
is definitely bringing
 not only a lot of benefits but
also
 some
backdraws
scenery hung at back of stage
backdrops
breakthroughs
. On the one hand, it is very beneficial to take a
gap
year
 for high students to have better choices of beginning university studies. If students decide to have practical working, they will have to find out a lot of ways to apply to their interested work
.
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.
Therefore
, they will have real experiments about information
from
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about
 relationships and facing obstacles in each circumstance
.
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.
Moreover
, they will know about what are
requirements
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the requirements
 of their jobs and train themselves the characters
such
 as self-esteem, self-discipline
,
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,
 time management or something else. I believe
that those choose
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those that choose
 to work or travel a
year
 will be mature to do their
next
 steps.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages that the young who take a
gap
year
 can meet.
Firstly
,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 in their country or going abroad takes
a mount
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an amount
amount
 of money to do so that students must ensure they have a
financil
involving financial matters
financial
 effort.
Secondly
, some skills which
they
of them or themselves
their
 studies in high schools may be
disapeared
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappeared
diapered
 or not
improvement
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an improvement
.
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.
Finally
, they need to be well-prepared about mental health because they work or travel themselves
,
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,
 means that they will face the difficulties without help
.
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.
 In conclusion, there are pros and cons for young people to make decisions forr their future and I consider that a
gap
year
 is a good choice for whom have a capacity to do alone
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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