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university education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

#university #education #students #proportion #people
In the 21st century, it is generally believed that only a certain group of
most successful students
Suggestion
the most successful students
 should have access to higher education. In my opinion,
this
 idea is quite reasonable.
However
, I
also
 think that
university
 can be entered for the normal students to learn as same as the high-level students.
First
 of all, the main reason why
university
 built was for
high
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higher
 education, allows young people who have high knowledge to study more and in the future, they can get a good job
such
 as businessmen, interpreters or managers.
University
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The university
 is unlike the other form of
school
 (secondary, high
school
,…) which contains high self-enlightened. Because of that, the
university
 should only be for the
academic
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academy
 students
instead
 of youngsters who have no plan for their future. But
university
Suggestion
the university
 is not the only way to succeed. There are many billionaires who don’t go to the
university
such
 as Bill Gates or Steve Job. I don’t support the idea of not going to
university but
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university, but
 choosing a practical
school which
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school, which
 includes vocational lessons is
also
 a good choice as well as the
university
.
Moreover
, the fact that going to
university
 is not 100% fully guaranteed that after
graduating you will
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graduating, you will
 get a good job.
Mostly
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Most
 the recruiters will not be using the degree to apply for the job, skills, and experience is what they need. So in conclusion, even though going
university
 was the best choice in the past, they should no longer be used as the only way to succeed. In the long term, people would prefer to learn practical
school than
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school, then
school then
 going to
university
 because of the skills required in adult life.
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