Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

However
, there a number of reasons why some
incline
Suggestion
inclines
to the idea that old buildings should be demolished and replaced by the new ones. Some old buildings have become too old and be more likely to pose a threat to the public.
This
means that old buildings have a weak infrastructure because building materials have deteriorated in quality over time, and
therefore
not reaching regulation standards anymore.
In addition
, demolishing an old building can be a good thing if the land could be used in a way
that is
more beneficial to the community. In metropolitan cities,
population
Suggestion
the population
has become more and it is essential to clear unused old buildings so that the construction of modern buildings can create more living spaces. It
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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