Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent decades, global warming
have been received
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has been receiving
has been received
a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impacts on the society. Despite the idea of
co existence
existing peacefully together
coexistence
between human and
climate
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change as
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change, as
appears reasonable,
this
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cannot be viewed as a good solution to solve
this
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problem. The coexistence is seemed as a dangerous threat to
environment
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the environment
.
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of all,
climate
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change
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mainly caused by human than nature itself. The energy to maintain and run human standard life is mostly produced by non renewable
power
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power, such
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as coal, gas which
is directly lead
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is directly leading
has directly led
directly leads
to the growth of rising temperature.
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, the manufacturing and mining industries contributing a huge negative effect
to
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on
the
climate
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is stil operated
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are still operated
is still operated
by corporations for their profits.
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, it
can be illustrate
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can illustrate
can be illustrated
that if neither of these corporations took
responsible
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responsibility
for action, the issue of
climate
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change
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would undoubtedly be worse. The consequence of living with
climate
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change
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is highly cost for both
human
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humans
and animals.
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, the increase in frequency of
unpredictably
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unpredictable
storms can cause massive destruction
for
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of
human
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as losing house and having a bad harvest.
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, migration waves
appears
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appear
and becomes a burden for
government
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the government
to deal with job creation and homeless.
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, global warming is a main reason for the verge of extinction for various species.
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, it will take a great cost and decades in order to recover it. In conclusion, owing to the
emergency
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emergence
and threatening of
climate
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change
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, it is clear that people, especially
government
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the government
and corporations should take steps to ensure ability to prevent global warming.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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