You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

Dear Mike, Trust You are doing well, I am happy to connect with you after
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time would like to inform you that I am applying for the Advance Financial Management course offered by
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school of the University of Texas . I have decided to apply for the course because the institute is one of the best and the curriculum
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involves the latest practice followed in the Industry Which will help me to enhance my skills and career to the
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a paying guest accommodation near the university campus at an affordable price ? will send you details of my arrival once
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get admission confirmation from the University .Would await
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your Confirmation and
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eager to see you soon after a long time Regards, John
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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