You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter: - Give detail of the job - Explain why it is important to you - Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

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Dear Mr Clarke, I hope you are doing well. I am one of your

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of management from

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batch. Today, I need a favour from you to start my career with a well know Industry in Steel ‘The O’Brien Rockers’.

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is my desire job with

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company, as they need a person with consistency at work and with the same field of education. I have

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job three months ago and they find my profile suitable for the position of Finance Executive at their Australian Branch. After a long period of

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opportunity to work in the same profile of my study.

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, it is very important for me to give stability to my financial conditions.

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, the company will help to get

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in Australia, which is a dream for anyone at the start of his career. Before

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I get the final documentation from

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, I have to submit a reference letter from my University, included my consistency in studies, achievements and character certificate. You always help your students and I believe I will receive

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letter in my favour from you very soon. Yours Obediently, Michal Marx

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter: - Give detail of the job - Explain why it is important to you - Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that zoos, which keep wild animals by man-made environment should no longer exist in 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that the government should give financial support to artists such as musicians, painters and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the government, while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.