Some people think computer games have negative impacts on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals think that playing

video

games can bring negative impacts on children. While

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree that there are several harmful effects of playing

video

games,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would argue that it

also

has a number of positive effects.

To begin

with, to play games

in

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on

computers might cause some negative impacts. The

first

one

is that since children spending too much

time

in

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on

computer

games, they have no

time

left to concentrate on their

study

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studies

.

As a result

, these children tend to receive lower marks than their

reers

the sense organ for hearing and equilibrium

ears

. According to some recent statistics conducted by

Vietnamese government

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the Vietnamese government

,

one

spending less than 2 hours per day in playing

video

games is more likely to have a 17.5% higher chance of passing the university entrance than

one

spending more than 2 hours. People who played

video

games have a 3 years longer

lifespan

than those who did not. People who played

video

games have a

lifespan

that is

3 years longer than those who did not.

Additionally

, when using

computer

in

long period

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a long period

of

time

, children might have some

health

issues

such

as headaches or strokes. As a consequence, these children usually suffer from serious pain, which might lead to their brief

lifespan

. Take Son Tung MTP,

one

of the well-known celebrities, as an example, he confessed that his

health

had been

detoriating

become worse or disintegrate

deteriorating

due to playing

video

games a lot.

However

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that using

computer

for

video

games has several benefits.

Firstly

, students can earn a lot of money by doing

this

kind of activity.

This

can be done by streaming their games

in

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on

social networking sites

such

as Facebook or

Youtube

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YouTube

to get tons of views and comments, which can lead to a plethora of money paid by these

websites

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web sites

.

For example

, Chim

se

di

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DI

nang

a river of western Thailand flowing southward to join the Ping River to form the Chao Phraya

Nan

nan

,

one

of the admirable idols of Vietnamese youngsters

,

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,

can get high salary by streaming Age of Empire – a famous game of Microsoft.

Secondly

, when playing games, these

video

-

gameaholics

can learn how to

magane

be successful; achieve a goal

manage

their

time

well to balance study-

time

and game-

time

.

As a result

, they can have a soft skill

that is

necessary for their career ladder in the future. In conclusion, while

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

accept that playing

video

games has some negative effects on children,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would argue that it

also

has other benefits. Individuals think that playing computerized games can bring negative effects on children. I

hightly

with gusto and without reservation

heartily

agree with that statement since

this

activity might bring several harmful impacts on children’s learning,

health

, and

mentality

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mental

.

To begin

with, playing electronic games can make children perform their study badly. Since they spend a huge amount of

time

in playing

video

games, they have no

time

left to concentrate on lectures and assignments. As a consequence, these

video

-

gameaholics

tend to gain lower scores in semester exams than their

reers

the sense organ for hearing and equilibrium

ears

.

For instance

, Son Tung,

one

of the most well-known celebrities of Vietnamese youngsters, failed the Banking Academy entrance due to playing online games frequently.

Additionally

, children who enjoy playing computerized games rarely do physical exercises, which might cause some serious

health

issues

such

as headaches or strokes. A recent

statistics

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statistic

conducted by

Vietnam Institute

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the Vietnam Institute

of Psychology and Social

Behavior

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Behaviour

indicates that a child under 15 playing computerized games more than 2 hours per day is likely to have 17.6% higher chance of getting headaches or strokes than those playing under 2 hours. If it is so, these illnesses might make students suffer from a plethora of pain and shorten their

lifespan

.

Finally

,

video

-

gameaholics

might have some problems related to

mentality

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mental

. When playing Person Versus Person (PVP) games, players tend to be more violent than usual, which can result in numerous terrible cases. Take Le Van

Luyen

the temporary provision of money (usually at interest)

Loan

Loon

, the cruel

sculprit

someone who perpetrates wrongdoing

culprit

of a serious crime, as an example,

this

murderer confessed that he had made that murder because of

being affected

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been affected

by the main character terrorist in some inappropriate

computer

games in his childhood. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree that computerized games are considered a factor that can bring numerous harmful effects on children because of the 3 reasons aforementioned.