Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in a building as al facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries only existing online.

Books play an important role in our lives. It is one of
effective ways
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the effective ways
o f
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of
learning. Libraries are one of
best
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the best
places where we can find a collection of various
type
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types
of books.
However
, now a days libraries are not limited to buildings. Now we have online
access
to almost every book that was only available in
libraries building
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the library building
library building
. In near future everyone, who has
access
to
internet
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the internet
will be able to read most of
books online
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the books online
. To my mind, it is a good phenomenon in
modern era
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the modern era
as most people do not have to go to
library
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the library
to read books. At
first
I wish to discuss
advantages
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the advantages
of online libraries. If libraries are would be accessible online,
then
there would be
positive impact
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a positive impact
on
environment
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the environment
as we would not have to use
papers
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paper
to print books. It will lead to less
emision
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emission
emissions
of toxic gases to
environment
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the environment
resulted from
production
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the production
of paper.
Moreover
, there would be
significant reduction
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a significant reduction
significant reductions
in
cutting
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the cutting
of trees for production of paper. On
other hand
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the other hand
, if public libraries will only exist online, it will be
big inconvenience
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a big inconvenience
for people who either do not have
access
to
internet
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the internet
or they do not know how to
access
libraries online.
In addition
to
this
, online libraries will attract more readers who like to spend more time on
mobile phone
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a mobile phone
or computer. Those people might find
more beneficial
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most beneficial
to read a book online than to spend hours on social media. On
other hand
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the other hand
, those people who started using
internet
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the internet
just to read books online may shift
thier
of them or themselves
their
interest to other services available online.
Moreover
, online libraries have
less cost
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less costly
to set up. Anyone would be able build and online library without spending a big part of his wealth. On
other hand
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the other hand
, online libraries are
easier
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easy
target
to
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for
of
those who want to steal sensitive information available in libraries. Currently, we have some libraries where few books and
doccuments
writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)
documents
are not accessible to anyone. Online libraries would be
easy target
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an easy target
for hackers. In the end, I can conclude that online
availablity
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of libraries
have
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has
both negative and positive sides. If we can assure
avialablity
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the availability
availability
of online libraries to
everyone
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everyone, then
then
it could have less disadvantages.
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