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As computers translate quickly and accurately , learning foreigen languages is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree

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One of the most controversial issues today relates to computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign
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 is west of time. Regarding
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 theme, various individuals hold different viewpoints.
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 should be examined from both points of view. In the
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 place, on one aspect of the debate there are people who argue that the benefits of learning foreign
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 considerably outweigh its drawback. The main reason for
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 is that the study foreign
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 is most comfortable for individuals cash and
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 you do not need guides when you travel. It is
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 possible to say that if people in the age of teenagers, they can earn money for them by ourselves and the rest will remain with the family. A superiority illustration of
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 is many people who know
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 from many continents they can teach young children too. Notwithstanding, it is
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 possible to say that computers are the smartest gadgets, but they are better in the offices not in the cities. People can’t chat many words standing in the centre of the street
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 opinion because many people who doesn’t know
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 They travel to many countries and they don’t want to spend money on people who know history and places in which they can relax,
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, guides. As shown above, there is no easy answer to
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 question. On balance,
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, I tend to believe that if people would learn and study for themselves it would be a good way to save money and discover.
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