More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Working in
house
Suggestion
the house
has been allowed by
huge number
Suggestion
a huge number
of companies in several developed governments. It causes to provide employees with
also
strengths and weaknesses, in my point of view, accomplishing the tasks of office is more preferable rather than commuting to company, On the one hand, it is commonly proved that working at
home
has large amount of benefits for both
such
as employees and owners,
first
of all workers save the financial benefits
for instance
fare of transportation and eating outside,
secondly
founders do not need to open a
such
kind of offices and pay the tax for accommodation, it was all related to financial purposes,
next
specific reason is said that individuals can have more leisure hours for household especially to children, On the opposite side to topic,
also
it includes more drawbacks, company CEOs may have difficulty monitoring performance with managing all
home
workers and their assignments,
also
it is claimed that increasing telecommunications costs,
also
workers must be ensured with good devices
such
as up-to-date computers and well organized internet, actually all jobs does not suit
home
working,
for example
, in companies where only food are prepared, here masses do not have enough comforts to work at
home
. In my conclusion, there all specific and clear reasons and thoughts were given, personally I would say that acquiring salary with staying at
home
is best op
Suggestion
the best option
tion in
the globaliza
Suggestion
globalized
globalizing
tion world, it provides large
Submitted by Uralbek Begmatov on

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