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Some people believe that standardized English exams, like IELTS, are just big business to make money, others however think that standard English exams are important for society, which do you believe and why?

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To start with, it is strongly believed that
IELTS
 is necessary for communication
otherwise
 some masses consider that it was organized like a business in order to earn money. I support that
although
this
system
 earns
such
 a profit for
owners
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the owners
 of
it I
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it, I
 believe that
also
English
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the English language system
language
system
 has a great influence
for
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in
 society and
language
 learners.
First
 of all, talking about
system
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the system
a system
 is for earning money, every
year millions
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year, millions
 of individuals have been taking
exam
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exams
an exam
the exam
 in
IELTS
, clearly the Owners can achieve the huge amount of money by
this
 business,
also
 it should be mentioned that the cost of
exam
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the exam
 is expensive which includes approximately two thousand million in central Asia. The disadvantages side of
language
system
 people who get score less than 5.5 they do not have any opportunity and, there are many people who could not achieve more
this
 band,
Second
 of all, the specific reasons will be brought opposed to
first paragraph
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the first paragraph
, it is well known that
IELTS
 plays a significant role in our career at the moment, the cause English is the top global
language
. It brings more benefits for most of younger, individuals who is planning
go
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to go
 abroad, they need the certificate of
IELTS
, By learning
this
system
 completely, people will get deep knowledge all related to English. They can communicate with natives with even people who come from all over the world
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