Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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To be honest, the method I have
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caught or fixed
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to being
the
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one, studying on your own. Due to financial
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limiting
and
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problem, I usually studied myself, which was not bad. By doing it, I could save my energy and
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because I didn't have to waste my
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on the road. Plus, I could save my money
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too, since
it needed less money.
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, I often had a hard
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understanding some difficult
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parts, especially
when it comes to speaking. I had nobody who could check what I said. In
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part, I think it would be more effective to take lessons with
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though it would cost more money and
time
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. Having
someone
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who will teach proper things right away would be
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greater
for some people and it would take less
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to master a foreign
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in the end.
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actually, though
I haven't studied
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to or in a foreign country
abroad
yet, I think going to live in a country where the
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is spoken is the best way to overcome a foreign
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. If
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goes there, she or he
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has
to use the
language
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, which can make
someone
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more study. What's more, like the common belief, when it comes to a
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, the more using
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, the better would be. She or he can adapt to their new
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more fast
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faster
than studying alone with books. They can learn more
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vivid, lively
language
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, which could not see in just books, and they would have more
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to practice it in their real life. In conclusion, I think when it comes to learning a new
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, it would be the best to study abroad if they can.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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