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you are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

#month #programme #uk #head #course #participants #event #organiser #interest #yhe #role #information
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Dearsir
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Dear sir
/madam, As you know we are going on a
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one
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one-month
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month
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 training programme
to
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UK
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the UK
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 and you want someone to take initiative for becoming the
head
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 of the course of the social
events
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organizer
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. I want to take initiative to become
head
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 of the social
events
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organizer
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. I will lead the
event
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 for
one
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month
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 as
head
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 of social
events
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organizer
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. I want to actively participate and take initiative as the
head
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 of the role. I am expressing my interest in
this
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 role. I will be obliged to lead the
event
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 for
one
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month
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head
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 of the social
events
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organizer
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. I want to lead
this
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one
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month
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 training programme in
UK
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the UK
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. Please give me the necessary guidelines regarding the details of the
event
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. I need the details related to when will the
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 start, what is
this
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event
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 about. In which city of
uk
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UK
 the
event
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 will take place. What is the
event
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 all about
.
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 How many people are participating in it
.
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 What is the
event
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 size
.
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a
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ahead
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head
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 of the social
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event
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,event
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 I want to tell you that
ive
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I've
 lead many
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. I have actively participated in many social
events
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a
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head
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 of the social
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organizer
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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