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you are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

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Dear
sir
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Sir
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/madam, I am going on a
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month
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month's
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 training programme
to
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in
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 the UK. It is a
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one
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one-month
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month
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 training programme. I want to participate in the
program
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. The
program
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 would be very interesting. I would learn a lot from a
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month
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month-long
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 training
program
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. I know that the head of the course would like
one
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 of the participants to be the social
event
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organizer
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. I would be happy to be the
organizer
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 of the
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one
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one-month
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month
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 training
program
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event
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. I would be highly obliged to fulfil my role as an
organizer
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. I am very interested in
this
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 role as an
event
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organizer
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. As a
participant
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participant,
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i
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 will be happy to be the
organizer
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 of the
event
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. I request you the details regarding the
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one
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one-month
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month
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 training
program
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 which will be held in the UK . I want to know from which date it will be held and till what date. I have conducted several training programs before as an
organizer
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.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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