you are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

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Dear
Mr.
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John Abraham, I am making a request to nominate me as the social
events
organiser
as you are going to select one of the participants. I feel I am appropriate for the position whom you are looking for. I have been longing for the social
events
organiser
position for many days after I completed my education. In my school and college days, I acted as an
organiser
of many social
events
. I performed well in those
events
as an
organiser
. One event still rings in my ear that I earned
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. I organised a trip to the Black Mountains in West Wales, UK when I was a final year student of
university
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. But after entering into professional life, I have not yet got
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opportunity to perform as an
organiser
. So, I am eager to take the role of
organiser
.
However
, could you please convey some information about the matter? How many
events
are planned to be held during the training session? Will these
events
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engage only the trainees involving the training session, or will there be any involvement outside our group? Will I be paid for the role or not? It would be greatly appreciated if you give me the opportunity as the
organiser
and provide me with relevant information. I look forward to receiving your reply. Yours sincerely, Michel Gomez
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