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It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

#women #men
Upbringing of children is an
artitistic
relating to or characteristic of art or artists
artistic
 activity
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Which
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requires lots of patience and understanding
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It is evident that women have proven to be successful in Parenting task over the men. In my opinion, mothers play a crucial role to make a child an ideal citizen of the community
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This
 essay will discuss the importance of motherhood for growth and
devolpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 of the offspring.
To begin
 with, Communication and conditioning are two important factors in rearing of children.Women have these
qualiites
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
qualities
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
 they are
comparetively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
 less
agressive
having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends
aggressive
 and more understandable than men.To elaborate females are more supportive during the
porcess
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
process
purchase
 of physical
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emotional
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social and intellectual
devolpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 of a child from infancy to adulthood.Apart from
this
, parenting refers to the intricacies involved in biological relationship which is beyond the understanding of men
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For
example when
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example, when
 infants are
hungary they
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hungry, they
hungry they
 cry only women would
undertand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
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 the same and will feed the child immediately
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • child-rearing
  • caregiver
  • social constructs
  • nurturing
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • paternity leave
  • co-parenting
  • development
  • economic pressures
  • primary caregiver
  • gender biases
  • fluidity of roles
  • societal norms
  • inherent differences
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