■ Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter
Dear Sir,
I am writing letters to show my resentments about the amenities offered to members at the sports club. As a permanent member of your club is not satisfied with the cleaning of
washroom
, hygiene of swimming pool and door lock of changing room is damaged, anyone can enter in.
I have a complaint for Add an article
the washroom
a washroom
door
lock is almost broken and found a cockroach in the pool in the previous month, the Pool’s water looks polluted and may cause infectious diseases. It has been said your issue would be resolved within one week, but Correct article usage
the door
its
Correct your spelling
it's
25th
day and no action has been taken for maintenance. If Correct article usage
the 25th
the
things would not be fixed I had to change my club.
So, I shall be grateful to your management if there would be a proper check on the pool water cleaning and call a carpenter to fix the lock as soon as possible. I hope on my coming visit, things would be corrected properly.
I look forward Correct article usage
apply
for
your prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
SaharChange the preposition
to
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