Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do yout agree or disagree?

The rich

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Richer

nations should help and opened the doors to refugees to

comes

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come

to their

country and give to

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country and give

them the basic assistance, like accommodation and meals. It is a very polemic theme, but it is important to bring those subjects to conversation, especially in those pandemic days, which a

lot

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of people have financial problems. The People should think about each other like they were

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

in

this

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planet. We have delimitations by countries, but we are all living in the same world. We

must to respect

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must respect

and be friendly with other nations, especially if they are in trouble, like having a civil war in their daily lives. Those excluded People could be

turn

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turned

to a very productive

people

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person

if they have been properly

education

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educated

educating

and having opportunities to join into the workforce to the nations which opened the doors for them. Those wealthy countries which does not

accepted

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accept

foreign people have a protectionism rules, which is understandable because since in those nations exists

different type

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different types

a different type

of classes, in

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

words, there are a few percentage which have a

lot

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of money and

na

be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about

know

no

now

knew

a

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of people without

de

definite article

the

basics

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basic

conditions to live, like provide at least the main meals of the day for their families and does not

got

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get

work in years. So, I understand they are more concern with their

on

belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive

own

population, and to providing resources for them,

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instead to

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instead, to

a person who was born in another country. It is important to think in the others and give to them new opportunities, they could help the economy and

de

definite article

the

diversity of the country a

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.