Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do yout agree or disagree?

The rich
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Richer
nations should help and opened the doors to refugees to
comes
Suggestion
come
to their
country and give to
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country and give
them the basic assistance, like accommodation and meals. It is a very polemic theme, but it is important to bring those subjects to conversation, especially in those pandemic days, which a
lot
of people have financial problems. The People should think about each other like they were
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
in
this
planet. We have delimitations by countries, but we are all living in the same world. We
must to respect
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must respect
and be friendly with other nations, especially if they are in trouble, like having a civil war in their daily lives. Those excluded People could be
turn
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turned
to a very productive
people
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person
if they have been properly
education
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educated
educating
and having opportunities to join into the workforce to the nations which opened the doors for them. Those wealthy countries which does not
accepted
Suggestion
accept
foreign people have a protectionism rules, which is understandable because since in those nations exists
different type
Suggestion
different types
a different type
of classes, in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
words, there are a few percentage which have a
lot
of money and
na
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
no
now
knew
a
lot
of people without
de
definite article
the
basics
Suggestion
basic
conditions to live, like provide at least the main meals of the day for their families and does not
got
Suggestion
get
work in years. So, I understand they are more concern with their
on
belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive
own
population, and to providing resources for them,
instead to
Accept comma addition
instead, to
a person who was born in another country. It is important to think in the others and give to them new opportunities, they could help the economy and
de
definite article
the
diversity of the country a
lot
.
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