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Born and bred in China, I have a keen interest in the
culture
, history, and economy of
this
land.
Therefore
, I choose to
study
cultural
industry
and aspire to become an outstanding professor and researcher of
cultural
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cultural industries
the cultural industry
industry
in China in the new millennium. My purpose in pursuing a
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Degree
in
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at
from
the University of King's College London, UK, is to gain a higher level of both theoretical knowledge and practical skills in
this
field
. My main interest, among the concentrations of your
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A program
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of
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on
in
the
culture
, media and creative industries, is in modern cultural
industry
project
management
. Modern cultural
industry
project
management
also
has the process of planning, implementation, control and so on, but at the same time, it has the characteristic which is significantly different from the previous projects and other
industry
projects. The originality and knowledge of cultural products put forward higher requirements for
project
management
. In China, cultural
industry
project
management
has not become an independent discipline until recent years. Fortunately, it
is has received
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is receiving
has received
more and more attention from its appearance. Due to the transformation and upgrading of consumption and the development of mass
culture
, China's cultural
industry
has been developing rapidly with the emergence of cultural
industry
projects. Under
such
circumstances, there is a great demand for professionals who can use creative thinking and expertise to manage cultural
industry
projects. As an assistant researcher in the Cultural
Industry
Research Institute of Shandong University, I have gained a lot of
first
-hand experience by participating in the
management
of modern cultural
industry
projects. Taking the " Zaozhuang Cultural Resources Big Data
Project
" as an example, the construction content of the
project
is divided into four parts: cultural
resources
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resource
system evaluation, big data standard system construction, big data platform construction, and big data application and promotion. The statistical method for the classification of cultural resources in Zaozhuang that I proposed was adopted by the
project
leader.
Such
an experience greatly stimulated my interest in
further
study
in the
field
of
project
management
of modern cultural
industry
. I am particularly concerned about the development of regional cultural resources
industry
, for that I think research in
this
field
is of special significance to China, a developing country with a long history and profound
culture
. I now wish to continue my academic career and pursue a doctorate in modern cultural
industry
project
management
, and I cannot imagine a better place to
study
this
than the
Culture
, Media and Creative Industries department at King's College London. I admire the reputation of the Department of
Culture
, Media and Creative Industries worldwide. The good academic atmosphere and
first
-class teaching and research will keep me abreast of the most cutting-edge and creative cultural
industry
projects.
In addition
, its location in London will provide me with a unique perspective on some of the new trends emerging in the
management
of modern cultural industries projects in the UK in the 21st century. I have obtained my Bachelor's degree in
management
, and expect to obtain my Master's degree in
management
next
June from Shandong University, which has the most prestigious
culture
industry
management
major in China. My
study
there has helped me lay a solid foundation in basic knowledge and skills in the subjects, and focused on the frontier areas of China's and even the world's cultural and creative industries, whereby I have come into contact with many fresh and energetic people and things. In
this
process, my research focuses gradually turned to the
field
of modern cultural
industry
project
management
. With a solid academic background and practical experience in
this
field
, I believe that the proposed doctoral education will provide me with a broader perspective and extraordinary creativity in my search for effective solutions to contemporary Chinese cultural
industry
project
management
issues. I sincerely hope that you will consider my application carefully and give me the chance to
further
my understanding of
this
field
, about which I am so passionate. There is no doubt that I will expend all possible time and effort to succeed in my studies. I hope that my application can be approved by you as I believe I would have great success and unforgettable experiences
at
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your university.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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