Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience

It is a common belief the

retirement

can

occurs

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occur

in

the late

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the later

years of an average lifespan of a human,

therefore

individuals should not keep

to work

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working

too many years. I firmly agree in terms of some reasons which elaborate in the essay. In the modern life, an average lifespan of the human is increasing because of the development of the technology and life standard.

THerefore

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Therefore

Therefor

, the governments and other authorities do not want to get retired of the workers.

For example

, In the past decades, the age of

retirement

was less than 5 years in my country. The employers could reach to retire in their early fifties, while these days that age is at least sixty. Admittedly, a young individual is diligent compared to

a

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an

older one. Due to, the elders should not join

to

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in

the employee area after their late 50s.

On the other hand

, the majority of the authorities hire older employers rather than young and

inexperimented

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in experimented

people. Accurately, they have high knowledge in their

professionality

in a professional manner

professionally

to eliminate some troubles in the company.

Although

, they have not adequate energy to produce in a highly profit,

in addition

, they are not open-minded to catch a new technology

such

as an application, or a new machine, even if a full column

excel

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excels

table.

This

is the reason, they should rest when they have been given their 20 years in a job. Meanwhile, unemployment among the youth, is

decline

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declined

declining

by

prefering

like better; value more highly

preferring

interns and new graduate individual. I strongly agree both of these people will have been happier than now, if the older ones get retire, and their job and responsibility is undertaken by the young ones. In conclusion, the

retirement

age should not be more than late fifties to engage benefit for the society. At the

last

words, if the elders can desire

retirement

pay check earlier, the rate of unemployment will decrease. To add, both of the new beginners and professionals will have been

satistied

filled with satisfaction

satisfied

and productive.