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Some people think it's better to have one-to-one classes, while some people think it's better to study in a group. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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one-to-one classes are better and some people believe that group studies are better my parable discuss both views These days examination pressure is too high for pupils so they all want to
study
 online because student can save their time and energy there are lots of measures
for instance
 scstudent can
study
 according to their times
moreover
 they do not need to travel and they can save time it will help them to
study
 hard
further
 more people can
study
 anywhere any time only they need is mobile or laptop with Internet
additionally
 they are more good able to do
study
 at home
However
 some citizens believe that face to face classes are better than online classes I
also
 believe the same because there are lots of reasons
for example
 if students are not understanding they can ask state away from their school partner
moreover
 a group course helps pupil always because sometime it hard to understand but friends can help face-to-face for the more it is very easy to understand face-to-face rather than online studies addition they are more capable to manage timing if they are going to school because school do not teach only subject much more In conlusion, we believe that group studies are more good for students because student get to know more knowledgeable things which use in future
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