Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe the male and female student should be educated by segregation in institutions, while some believe they should be combined and teach in one
class
.
This
essay will discuss on both views and given an
opinion why
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opinion, why
mixed
class
in more beneficial for overall development of learner than teaching them separately. To commence with, people one
hand believe
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hand, believes
hand believes
male and female student need to teach in
separate
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separate classes
a separate class
class
for their better education. Because it's
make
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made
them more comfortable and convenient to share each other interest. If the male and female teach in
separately they
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separately, they
will learn more comfortably than together.
For instance
, while teaching health and education subject some time they feel uncomfortable to ask
question
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questions
a question
or interest as they feel shy with each other.
This
type of shyness keep them backwards in knowledge about the health system so to confer them more knowledge
in
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on
comfy condition, separate
class
are
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is
crucial.
However
,
on the other
hand some
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hand, some
people believe mixed
class
is more beneficial than separate. If there is no
discrimatiom
between sex and kept in
same
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the same class
class
they have a feeling of
equality
which assists to make their mind broad.
For example
, a recent study concluded that more than 80% people who have
study
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studied
in mixed
class
seem to be more broad mind and feeing of
equality
when Study at mixed
class
. Due to
this
they can share each
other problem
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other, problem
and move together without any discrepancies.
Moreover
, rather than involving in same sex if
opponent
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opposing
sex they make
friends they
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friends, they
can understand them very well as well and encourage them to be confident and easy going person.
Hence
, mixed
class
is more effective than separate. To sum up, on one
hand
separate
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a separate class
class
forge them comfortable and easy to share each other problems, while on other
hand
mixed
class
male a their mind and develop
positive feeling
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positive feelings
a positive feeling
of
equality
. In my opinion, mixed
class
is better as it's
develop
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developed
student confident as well as positive feeling of
equality
.
Submitted by Sabu  on

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  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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