Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people believe the male and female student should be educated by segregation in institutions, while some believe they should be combined and teach in one
class
. This
essay will discuss on both views and given an opinion why
mixed Accept comma addition
opinion, why
class
in more beneficial for overall development of learner than teaching them separately.
To commence with, people one hand believe
male and female student need to teach in Suggestion
hand, believes
hand believes
separate
Suggestion
separate classes
a separate class
class
for their better education. Because it's make
them more comfortable and convenient to share each other interest. If the male and female teach in Suggestion
made
separately they
will learn more comfortably than together. Accept comma addition
separately, they
For instance
, while teaching health and education subject some time they feel uncomfortable to ask question
or interest as they feel shy with each other. Suggestion
questions
a question
This
type of shyness keep them backwards in knowledge about the health system so to confer them more knowledge in
comfy condition, separate Suggestion
on
class
are
crucial.
Suggestion
is
However
, on the other
hand some
people believe mixed Accept comma addition
hand, some
class
is more beneficial than separate. If there is no discrimatiom
between sex and kept in same
Suggestion
the same class
class
they have a feeling of equality
which assists to make their mind broad. For example
, a recent study concluded that more than 80% people who have study
in mixed Suggestion
studied
class
seem to be more broad mind and feeing of equality
when Study at mixed class
. Due to this
they can share each other problem
and move together without any discrepancies. Accept comma addition
other, problem
Moreover
, rather than involving in same sex if opponent
sex they make Suggestion
opposing
friends they
can understand them very well as well and encourage them to be confident and easy going person. Accept comma addition
friends, they
Hence
, mixed class
is more effective than separate.
To sum up, on one hand
separate
Suggestion
a separate class
class
forge them comfortable and easy to share each other problems, while on other hand
mixed class
male a their mind and develop positive feeling
of Suggestion
positive feelings
a positive feeling
equality
. In my opinion, mixed class
is better as it's develop
student confident as well as positive feeling of Suggestion
developed
equality
.Submitted by Sabu on
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