You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.  Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the electrical machines available in your shop. I am aware that your retail is close to my house, which is convenient for me.

Firstly

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, I would like to ask if I can find a red coffee machine for my black kitchen,

this

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color

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will lighten up the room.

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, I want the new

playstation

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PlayStation

4 for my two boys.

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, I am searching for a big size dishwasher for my countryside villa to facilitate my homework.

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, I am aware that my order might not be available at the moment.

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I need to ask if there is any possibility to request these items. If yes, I need you to reply to

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email specifying the approximate time needed for

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order to be available.

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, the eligibility time

entitled

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to me to collect it. Considering all the above, I kindly ask you to send me a detailed bill, in which you specify the model,

color

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, name and price of each product apart. Looking forwards to hearing from you soon, Yours faithfully,

Mayaline

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Maya line

Youssef

mike youssefFri Jun 05 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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