 People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfill their needs. There is no need for advertisement and considered as a form of entertainment.  To what extend do you agree or disagree with it.

Though most of the folks prefer to buy a goods which meets to their own
desires but
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desires, but
they do not give time to impress on any announcement for getting articles. I
full
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fully
agree with
this
statement because now a day’s individual
do not want
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does not want
to waste their time on watching the publicity and find display as a fun. Some human’s believe that goods will be able to
shopping
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shop
for its exhibit. At
first
, in
this
way they would get low rank material.
For example
, in
Asian country
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Asian countries
the Asian country
an Asian country
, in Japan as well as China publicized their
product
all over the world. In spite having
well
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good
standard they are unable to sale out their
product
on
whole world
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the whole world
.
However having
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However, having
well display it is does not mean that it has
well
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good
value.
That is
why, individual
are investing
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is investing
for
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in
getting
product
on the others country too. Argue, it is better to buy for well goods not only depending on commercial. In opposite view, some
people
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peoples
opinions that anything should be shopped for his own basic needs with getting publicity. Though, most of the
individual
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individuals
illiterate but
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illiterate, but
they are obeying the economist.
For instance
, in European countries, in German,
economist
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the economist
an economist
said, pay for only well grade things after confirming that it is your real need.
Therefore
, their 99 percent nation used to take only well quality
material but
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material, but
not even watching commercial. In
this
way they got satisfaction against their wishes. Argue it is
crucial idea
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a crucial idea
for shopping
product
which
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
fulfilled
fulfils
their basic needs. In conclusion some human being thinks buying articles should be only for their full filling their basic desires.
Therefore in
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Therefore, in
this
matter they
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matter, they
are not getting
involve
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involved
in vein fun. I totally agree with
this
statement that everyone should wise choose things as a invest
in which
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in, which
would be really full fill their purpose.
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