completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Experience
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' is the best lesson to improve ourself. It happens in any part of life. It is a continuous process. For that,
one
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should mingle with different kinds of people. The
University
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platforms provide
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opportunity to students. School education is
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kind of moulding whereas
university
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training is another kind of moulding. Both are very important to a generation. The
university
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study gives a sort of courage, clean idea of doing a particular task, and it helps to make future plans. I myself am the example. When I was studying in Bharathidasan
University
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, I got a chance to learn so many new things, say organize an event, how to prepare for a speech, etc. We were grouped as a
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,
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as Stage
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, MC
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, Guest receiving
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, Food
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, Audience controlling
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. Each group is assigned a
job
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. For each event the
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members will get interchanged. It's a quite nice
experience
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. I have learnt in which I am strong. When I completed my
university
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education, I can see huge demand of employees in IT companies, and other industries. I was able to categorize, analyse and organize things. I had a clear idea of my career. I got a
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in a well known MNC.
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, 'Soft Skills' are good communication skill, presence of mind, handling critical problems, creating a feasible situation around us, etc. 'Soft skills',
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should learn from the environment and
experience
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, both are interconnected I can say. Nowadays, Unversities provides soft skills programs to all department students. Even I have undergone a soft skill program, but it became possible only because I was in
university
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. It was a part of my study. Soft skills alone will not help to get into an appointment. It is a part of an important quality that
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should posses to get a
job
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. Even though you are well educated, if you don't have soft skills, you will not get that
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. As far as concern, Companies will hire a person as a new trainee, who have good academic marks as well as good soft skills (if it is proven through a certificate, much better).
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that person gets work
experience
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there and continues if he wants
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moves to another better
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according to his
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. As said before, gaining
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is a continuous process.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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