Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. what are the causes? Suggest some solutions?

It
is assert
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is asserted
asserts
is to assert
that in present
time
, youth has become impolite and less respectful as compared to past
time
.
This
essay will intend to examine the reasons behind it as well as some measures in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. At the outset, various causes are responsible behind it. The
first
causative factor is that parents have become workaholic
therefore
they have no spare
time
for spending with their children due to which young children has deprived from moral values. Resultantly, youth has become more aggressive today
,
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,
who
are not give
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is not giving
doesn't give
does not give
has not given
respect to their elders and parents as well. A survey conducted by Punjabi university which revealed that the number of the children was 10%more who were impolite than
previous year
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the previous year
previous years
. It would say
not be
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is not
was not
not being
were not
wrong that due to
careless
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carelessness
of the
parents younger
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parents, younger
blood
has becoming
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is becoming
has become
mannerless
. What is more, technology is another factor which cannot be ignored. Most of
time
children spend to play video games
that is
why they don't like to interact with their
neibours
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
ND peers.
Thus
, they always feel irritation when someone
try
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tries
to talk with them ND they do misbehaviour.
A
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An
article was published in Washington which revealed that 20% children have
addricted
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
of the technology due to which they prefer to
live isolation
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live in isolation
.
As a
result they
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result, they
are less polite.
On the other hand
,
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,
although
there are a lot of reasons behind
this
problem but
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problem, but
some possible steps can be taken by parents to reduce
this
. Mother and father should spend more
time
with their offspring and
tells
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is told
to them
values
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the values
of respectful
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and patience
.
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.
Along with
this
they ought to check what their child on
Mobile phone
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the Mobile phone
.
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.
To conclude, even though
,
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,
many causes like
busy schedule
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a busy schedule
of parents and technology is responsible for
this
menace but
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menace, but
it can be tackled by managing
time
table for children and both parents have to find
time
to spend with their juveniles.
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