Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. what are the causes? Suggest some solutions?
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causative factor is that parents have become workaholic therefore
they have no spare time
for spending with their children due to which young children has deprived from moral values. Resultantly, youth has become more aggressive today ,
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are not give
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What is more, technology is another factor which cannot be ignored. Most of time
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