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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

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In many Countries, the amount of
crime
 is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of
Crime
? How can we deal with those
causes
an occurrence of something
cases
? Criminal activities have shown growth in most parts of the world. There are several
reasons but
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reasons, but
 in my opinion two major reasons are lack of formal
education
 and unemployment and they are related to each other. A recent study shows that
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 has declined by approximately 30% in those countries where better employment opportunities are available like South Korea, UAE and Qatar. To succeed in creating better job opportunities the government should introduce right policies and implement them without any discrimination.
For instance
, the UAE has introduced a new system that makes it easy to start your own business and have strict
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 law to protect employee rights which ultimately helps to divert young people from any kind of criminal activities. Another solution which can play an important role in preventing
people especially
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people, especially
 youngsters from indulging in any kind of illegal activities is formal
education
. China is the right example for that.
Recently Tim
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Recently, Tim
Cook CEO
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Cook, CEO
 of Apple Corporation said in his interview that China holds the biggest pool of skilled
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 than any other country.
This
 was only possible through introducing free formal technical
education
 policy to their young people and providing
onsite
taking place or located at the site
on-site
 experience at the same time. People can
also
 play an important role in
reduction
Suggestion
the reduction
 of
crime
 rate by being more vigilant and responsible in their
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
. To conclude, lack of
education
 and employment opportunities are the main reasons for the increase in the
crime
 rate. By providing vocational
education
 for free or at affordable rates and by creating more employment opportunities the government can address
this
 problem to a great extent.
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  • violent crimes
  • socioeconomic factors
  • law enforcement
  • technology
  • education
  • employment
  • drug abuse
  • alcohol abuse
  • poverty
  • inequality
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  • investing
  • job creation
  • social support
  • community engagement
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