Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education
of children has been an important issue over the past decades. Use synonyms
some
parents believe that they are responsible for teaching children. Suggestion
Some
However
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Use synonyms
school governers claim
that they have the essential roles in teaching Suggestion
the school governor's claim
school governor's claim
school governor's claims
a school governor's claim
childrens
. I believe that both a young person of either sex
children
do
the same impact on engage in
make
children
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children's
education
.
Some parents have been Use synonyms
challenging
with Suggestion
challenged
educational system
over the past years. They claim that the essential Suggestion
the educational system
an educational system
educator
of children is them. Because they born child and have known them perfectly, so they can teach children based on their Suggestion
education
behavior
and desires. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
Linking Words
Also they
believe that children spend most of their time with Accept comma addition
Also, they
parents resulting
in the strong connection between Accept comma addition
parents, resulting
them by
which parents can incredibly teach children to behave well as a member of society.
Accept comma addition
them, by
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on
the other hand, Suggestion
On
school
Use synonyms
governers
say they are the best leader for children. They claim that teachers have properly been educated for teaching children behaving based on lifespan that needs the precise attention and knowledge to correct them. the head of a state government
governors
Besides
, the Linking Words
school
Use synonyms
have been provided
with the best equipments associated with gender and age of children which help them to accept perfect model for acting Suggestion
has been provided
such
a good citizen.
Linking Words
Education
has been an important issue for Use synonyms
educational system
and parents. It seems that being in Suggestion
the educational system
educational systems
school
as a student for children causes Use synonyms
they
learn precisely and effectively that makes objective case of they
them
school
Use synonyms
governers
as an important part in teaching children. the head of a state government
governors
However
, parents spend much more time with Linking Words
children
the rest of the day, so, they strongly affect on children Suggestion
the children
unconciously
. I believe that as long as children go to without awareness
unconsciously
school
, the teachers have an important role Use synonyms
on
Suggestion
in
children
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children's
education
the same as Use synonyms
parents
. It is expected that they try to design the best way of Suggestion
the parents
education
as two important proportions in children life and Use synonyms
education
.Use synonyms
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