You have recently been on a vacation in a foreign country and stayed at a home-stay, you have realised that you have misplaced an expensive wristwatch and cannot find it. Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you.
Dear Ronnie,
Hope all is well,
Firstly
I would like to thank you for warm
hospitality provided by you and your Correct article usage
the warm
Family
during my stay at your home place in Bali.
During the stay at your place, I Forgot my Correct your spelling
family
Correct your spelling
wristwatch
wrist watch
on your couch, when we were discussing Correct your spelling
wristwatch
over
the coffee.
Correct pronoun usage
it over
Its
a Tissot Watch with stainless steel body and black dial the dial glows in dark and has starting letter of my Name engraved on the Replace the word
It's
It is
back side
the watch is close to my soul as its gift from somebody and is a limited edition watch.
If you find the same, can you please inform me as well it would be a great help if you can express courier the same to my residence address which is present in your recordCorrect your spelling
backside
.
I am sorry for the inconvenience caused to you on my behalf.
Would await Change the punctuation
?
for
some positive reply from your side
Wishing you Good health
Regards,
JohnChange preposition
apply
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.