Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
It is observed that more and more people are undertaking the extreme activities
such
as hang-gliding, mountain
climbing. People tend to risk their life
in such
tasks mainly beacuse
of for the reason that; on account of
because
sense
of personal satisfaction, physical fitness and to explore new places. In my opinion, these kinds of activities are good as it Suggestion
a sense
yeilds
many be the cause or source of
yields
benifits
to the financial assistance in time of need
benefits
person
and society
, However
, needs to be performed with extreme cautions.
Adventure thrills
many people leading to Accept comma addition
Adventure, thrills
sense
of personal satisfaction. Extreme activities will take people out of their comfort zone and requires them to push one's own limit which encourage them to set new horizon for Suggestion
a sense
themself
. reflexive form of "them"
themselves
For instance
, one hiker who successfully climbed 3000 feet
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foot
mountain
will set target
to climb Suggestion
targets
5000 feet
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a 5000 foot mountain
5000 foot mountain
mountain
next
time. Some people are fond of outdoor activities from their childhood and these kind
of tasks will give them an opportunity to pursue their intrest
which in turns a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
lead
to their own happiness.
Another important reason people risk their lives is to maintain the fitness and explore the new places. These Suggestion
leads
kind
of activites
requires any specific behavior
activities
person
to be physically and mentally fit. So in order to get themselves prepared for Suggestion
a person
the person
people
such
life
threatning
activity, people sweat in the fitness clubs as well as undergo threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
rigerous
training for years which will benefit for their overall health.
rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
rigorous
Finally
, the trend that has emerged to take up such
life
risking activites
is in the well being of any specific behavior
activities
activists
person
and Suggestion
people
persons
the person
society
if undertaken carefully. People can take up these kind
of activities as their career and can get get name and fame on the international platforms. It will lead to the discovery of new places leading to commercial activity taking place in these areas which will feed thousands of poeple
living in (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
these area
.
In conclusion, Suggestion
these areas
this area
activites
any specific behavior
activities
such
as hang-gliding to mountain
climbing involves risk for life
on the other hand
it will have enormous benifits
leading to the financial assistance in time of need
benefits
person
and society
. These kind
of activities needs to be encouraged by society
as well as government with certian
guideline outlined in order to ensure the safety of the people.definite but not specified or identified
certain
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