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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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It is observed that more and more people are undertaking the extreme activities
such
 as hang-gliding,
mountain
 climbing. People tend to risk their
life
 in
such
 tasks mainly
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of
sense
Suggestion
a sense
 of personal satisfaction, physical fitness and to explore new places. In my opinion, these kinds of activities are good as it
yeilds
be the cause or source of
yields
 many
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 to the
person
 and
society
,
However
, needs to be performed with extreme cautions.
Adventure thrills
Accept comma addition
Adventure, thrills
 many people leading to
sense
Suggestion
a sense
 of personal satisfaction. Extreme activities will take people out of their comfort zone and requires them to push one's own limit which encourage them to set new horizon for
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
.
For instance
, one hiker who successfully climbed 3000
feet
Suggestion
foot
mountain
 will set
target
Suggestion
targets
 to climb
5000 feet
Suggestion
a 5000 foot mountain
5000 foot mountain
mountain
next
 time. Some people are fond of outdoor activities from their childhood and these
kind
 of tasks will give them an opportunity to pursue their
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
 which in turns
lead
Suggestion
leads
 to their own happiness. Another important reason people risk their lives is to maintain the fitness and explore the new places. These
kind
 of
activites
any specific behavior
activities
 requires
person
Suggestion
a person
the person
people
 to be physically and mentally fit. So in order to get themselves prepared for
such
life
threatning
threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
 activity, people sweat in the fitness clubs as well as undergo
rigerous
rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
rigorous
 training for years which will benefit for their overall health.
Finally
, the trend that has emerged to take up
such
life
 risking
activites
any specific behavior
activities
activists
 is in the well being of
person
Suggestion
people
persons
the person
 and
society
 if undertaken carefully. People can take up these
kind
 of activities as their career and can get get name and fame on the international platforms. It will lead to the discovery of new places leading to commercial activity taking place in these areas which will feed thousands of
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 living in
these area
Suggestion
these areas
this area
. In conclusion,
activites
any specific behavior
activities
such
 as hang-gliding to
mountain
 climbing involves risk for
life
on the other hand
 it will have enormous
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 leading to the
person
 and
society
. These
kind
 of activities needs to be encouraged by
society
 as well as government with
certian
definite but not specified or identified
certain
 guideline outlined in order to ensure the safety of the people.
Submitted by ajay wadkar on

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