Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week. Do you agree?
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Nowadays, there are many young people who are suffering from health problems because they do not like to do some exercise. It is a good idea to force
this
group having more outdoor activities in order to make them healthier of both
physical and mental status. I firmly agree with this
statement and this
essay will explore both
views.
Firstly
, there have been many high technologies introduced to our world, such
as the internet which provides a lot of activities, specially indoor activities like games, comedy shows and so on. As a result
, most of youngsters
are likely enjoyed and spent most of their leisure time on it. Suggestion
most youngsters
Thus
, this
group will not want to go out and do some sports outdoor
activities as there have been served from many convenient tools. So these groups Accept comma addition
sports, outdoor
are tend
to be obese and having silent diseases, Suggestion
tend
such
as diabetes, high cholesterols and so on. For example
, from Thai Health reports showed that there are increasing of
obesity in children aged between 6 and 12 years old.
Suggestion
there are increasing
On the other hand
, if there are encouragements from both
of
school and family to convince the young adults having some sports Suggestion
in
such
as soccer, swimming, volleyball and any other sports, it may help them getting
more outdoor activities. Suggestion
get
Consequently
, they will increase of movement and stimulate their blood circulation and also
burn the energy, so this
will help them maintaining
a strong body Suggestion
maintain
to maintain
instead
of only sitting all day in front of the television.
To sum up, both
of government and family should encourage their children having fun from outdoor activities more than sitting and playing games all the time. I do agree with forcing this
group to have more socializing in the real world and this
will offer them getting stronger.Submitted by su_nu33 on
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