It is sometimes said that the countryside offers a high quality of life, especially for families. What are the arguments for and against families choosing to live and work in the countryside, for example as farmers? What is your own view about this?

There can be few choices in
life
more important than where to settle as a family, and the question of an urban or rural location is complex. There are strong arguments for and against living in the
countryside
, as we will discuss now. On the one hand, it might be said that the
countryside
is rather a backwater, with fewer cultural amenities than a city in the form of museums, theatres and even sporting events.
This
may mean that families become isolated, especially as rural depopulation leaves fewer country dwellers in the area, as we see,
for example
, in central France. Added to
this
is the scarcity of schools and colleges, meaning that children may need to travel long distances for their education.
Finally
, career options may be more limited in the
countryside
for both parents and children, resulting in rural unemployment and long-term rural poverty in the worst cases.
Conversely
,
life
in the
countryside
has rewards which go beyond material considerations.
For example
, the abundance of natural resources
such
as land,
wildlife forestry
Accept comma addition
wildlife, forestry
and water bodies means that a comparatively simple
life
can be lived at a subsistence level. Many country residents are self-sufficient smallholders in
this
sense, safeguarding them from the changes in the wider economy which can afflict city dwellers. If the parents are farmers, children learn the importance of animal husbandry, methods of farming
such
as crop rotation and irrigation, and generally may become more in tune with the natural world
as a result
.
Finally
, as technology enables children to undertake distance learning or remote viewing of cultural attractions
such
as museums, they should be less isolated from their cultural heritage. Overall, it seems to me that
quality
Suggestion
the quality
of
life
in the
countryside
today is indeed quite high, with its advantages of resources, self-sufficiency and environmental awareness.
This
is especially true now that communications are reducing the risk of isolation in
such
far-flung communities
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