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Some people believe that one _ on _one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior . Discuss both views and give your opinion ?

#people #_ #_one #lessons #group
Students adapt different
study
 methods to master their lessons
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 It is believed by some people that individual learning is effective
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however others
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however, others
 think that
compine
have or possess in combination
combine
camping
combined
study
 is more powerful
this
essay discuss
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essay, discuss
 about both view points and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 side with the latter view
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 On one hand
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 pupil can fully concentrate if they
study
 alone as there is no distractions in between their studies
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Also it
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Also, it
 is good for them to dedicate more or less time according to their understanding capacity
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For example
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 studying mathematics would be
more easy
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easier
 if they
alone solve
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alone, solve
maths
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math
 problems in their own space and if they feel
bored they
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bored, they
 can take some time off and continue with the studies after that
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 Some exceptional
study
 items
such
 as theories
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 historical dates
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 drawings can only be
master
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a master
by
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of
 one to one
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On the other hand
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 group
study
make
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makes
 learning more interesting as students avoid route learning
instead
 they learn a subject by vast understanding through the lips of their classmates
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also
 they might not feel bored
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 Students easily remember long essays as group members teach it in point
vise
having or prompted by wisdom or discernment
wise
this
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Moreover many
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Moreover, many
 students
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 feel scared to clear doubt
infront
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in front
 of their teacher can easily approach their team members
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 Effective utilization of time can
bepossible
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be possible
 because
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a short period people can
study
 a particular topic
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 Assignments
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practicals
a customary way of operation or behavior
practices
practical
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 can be completed with joint efforts more effectively
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 To conclude
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,
 solo
study
 enables to understand students strength and weakness and promotes route learning
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 I believe group
study
 is more effective as it is
a
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an
 active form of
study
 method and pupil feel learn more depth knowledge
also
 they get a chance to correct their doubts
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