It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Talent
is God-gifted. Whether people can acquire
such
gift through hard work or not has always been a controversial topic. Some believe only talented children can truly excel in certain areas,
such
as sports or music, while others disagree. They believe
practice
is the key to success.
This
essay will shed light on both of the views before concluding with mine. Some people highlight that; one simply can’t outdo God given talents. People who are born with an inherent aptitude for skills,
such
as: singing, dancing, sports or music tend to put no or very less effort, in order to achieve incredible results.
For instance
, Mozart, one of the greatest musicians and influential composers of all times, not only exhibited his innate
talent
for music, but
also
performed for
royal family
Suggestion
the royal family
at a very young age.
Thus
, in the absence of
talent
, to reach to
this
level through conventional hard work and determination, will definitely take much longer comparatively.
Furthermore
, genetics
is
Suggestion
are
the reason why there are similar characteristics between the parents and a child. To exemplify, daughter born to a mother who is a great tennis player tends to have the skills not only through genetics but
also
the familiar environment.
Conversely
,
practice
makes perfect. Others believe that anybody with the right guidance, constant
practice
and appropriate circumstances can acquire the skills needed to excel in a particular field of desire; whether it may be artistic or athletic. According to a survey done by an Iranian sports journal in 2017, many participants of a football institute were able to excel and join the national football team by rigorous training,
practice
and exercise physiology.
Additionally
, environment and circumstances
such
as family support plays an important role in the success. A good illustration, would be Cristiano Ronaldo, who was born to a family of no athletic background, yet through his diligence, strong willingness, determination, and support from family he has been
known the greatest
Suggestion
known as the greatest
footballer of all times. In conclusion, even though both arguments have their own merits,
practice
and
talent
are not mutually exclusive. In order for a
talent
to outshine, it needs
practice
. A talented musician cannot be successful if he does not put any effort into
practice
.
Hence
, in my
opinion both
Accept comma addition
opinion, both
inborn skills and consistent
practice
are required in combination to achieve excellent results.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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