Topic: Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both of view.

Doraemon
is a famous comic written
bu
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by
Fujiko. The story introduces to us a robot from 22 century named
Doraemon
with his close friend
such
as Nobita, Shizuka It is attractive to almost children whole the world with not only a large number of adventures together but
also
unexpected situations The series is divided into short and long stories. In the short ones, each episode will include many small stories that happen around the daily life of Nobita. Because of being a clumsy boy, and often bullied by his friends, most of the time he needs
Doraemon
to use the magic gadgets of the future to help him. In the long ones,
Doraemon
, Nobita and his friends will be going on
mysterious yet
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mysterious, yet
dangerous adventures to save the world. Each adventure is always out of danger thanks to the magic gadgets of
Doraemon
, especially their sincere friendship. It’s an extremely original story and the script is so excellent. The characters are so clever and well- developed that I am at all interested in what happened to them It is a highly entertaining story. I would recommend
this
comic to anyone who like it and want to have a nice time
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