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Write a letter o new our for the noise happened at your house flat.

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Dear Mr Sahota, I am
the
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 new resident in your housing society. The purpose of my writing is to apologize
from
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 you for the inconvenience caused
from
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 my place
last
 night
as a result
to
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 a minor fight. Describing my situation, I really feel guilty for the unpleasant noises which had let your family suffered . Actually, I was giving
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housewarming party to my friends. Simultaneously,everything was going smooth that a small talk has emerged into a verbal fight with a loud shouting inadvertently. On that verge, I was feeling hopeless as both of my personal friends became the party pooper.
Thus
,
this
 has happened over a silly topic . In
between
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 I tried my best to make it abandon but all my efforts had gone in vain. At
last
, one of our senior
friend
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 helped to tackle the problem.
Lastly
, I would feel sorry for
this
 all again and refrain to not hold
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party again to cause
further
 problematic events. I know I have put you in troublesome but
this
 will be
last
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 of that night. I hope you will
compassionate
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 enough to understand my unpleasant situation. Yours faithfully, Sarab.
Submitted by Sarab on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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