The position of women in the society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arises from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The world has been certainly revolutionized and affected the human thinking.

This

will lead to the professions that women are getting compared to the past. Some people opine that

this

modernization view affect the children’s development as the mothers are working. I strongly support

this

view. The essay will discuss my stance with the arguments in below paragraphs.

To begin

with, the predominant reason behind the number of crime activity done by the child is that

this

people

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person

having lack of knowledge and love. As their both parents are working;

this

people

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person

spend

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spends

most of the time alone

at

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in

the home. Even they watch some of the shows on the Tv which influences them to do the wrong task.

Moreover

, most of the tender

get

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gets

the motivation and support from their peer members.

Although

sometimes these people forces the child to attempt the crime; having no idea about its future impact.

For example

, research conducted shows that many school students have attempted antisocial work to show their courage to their friends.

Furthermore

, the advancement of the technology has delivered many electronics gadgets with

that people

Accept comma addition

that, people

can make connection over the world. As

this

will contain some programs which create the detrimental impact on the children’s psyche.

However

,

this

can be done by continuous monitoring them and providing the positive atmosphere which increases their confidence.

For instance

, many games are developed which contains the concept of revenge makes them criminals. In conclusion, as per my opinion, the number of

atrocity

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atrocities

done by the children is

raising

advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status

rising

due to lack of training done by their parents as having less time and the internet which

deliver

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delivers

the programs which spoil the career.