Now the machine is very complex , and a lot of difficult work is automated . Does this machine automation have more pros than cons ?

Modern technology has equipped us with machines
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which are working like robots
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There are positive and negative effects of these machines on the individual and the society
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Overall the pros outweigh the cons
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On the positive side
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machines are faster
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more convenient and energy saving
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Households and industries are much facilitated with machines
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Personal use of machines gives people more free time to spend with family and pursue hobbies
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Likewise
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industrial use of machines
reduce
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reduces
manpower for
work
and
increses
become bigger or greater in amount
increases
increase
output
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In the words of Oscar Wild - On
machanical
using (or as if using) mechanisms or tools or devices
mechanical
slavery
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" on the slavery of the
machine
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the future of the world depends"
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Moreover
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computer machines or robots manage our banks and even the tickets at
airport
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the airport
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the machine _ robot
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The computerization certainly relieves humans from
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dull, repetitive
tasks without any human error
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What is more
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robotic surgeries and eye operations can be better done with the help of robotic surgeons
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On the negative side
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machines reduce the need of manual
work
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which can lead to
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the state of being employed or having a job
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Also
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insufficient knowledge of equipment handling and
operating
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operation
is detrimental to
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an educated
uneducated
workers and they end up getting injuries or disabilities while working with it
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Technical failures can
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disturb
disturbed
distribute
the whole working system and lead to losses
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In addition
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health can be
detoriated
so badly formed or out of shape as to be ugly
distorted
decorated
as devices
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lifestyle, especially
housewives who
relay
have confidence or faith in
rely
heavily on these for household chores
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Machines are a failure where creative
work
is required
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For example
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machines cannot reproduce the unique and
orginal
preceding all others in time or being as first made or performed
original
work
done by many artisans
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It has been rightly said that a
machine
can do the
work
of a thousand ordinary men
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but no
machine
can do the
work
of one extraordinary man
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Overall
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the advantages of machines
outwiegh
be heavier than
outweigh
the disadvantages on the individual and
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an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
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However
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in developing countries
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in order to meet the employment needs of the population
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a balance has to be maintained between manual
work
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