Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who some time disagrees with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #friends #it’s #time

There is a general belief that natural

medicine

is very

usefull

being of use or service

useful

for our health

Accept space

but there are other's who

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

believed

that only

alopat

medicine

is the right one for their illness.From my point of view both of

this

practice are

usefull

being of use or service

useful

for our health

Accept space

Nowadays,

medicine

is in a continuous development

Accept space

doctors are more and more

prepeared

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

not only in knowledge

areas but

Accept comma addition

areas, but

even how to interact with patients and

understend

know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

understands

understood

them.

natural

Suggestion

Natural

therapy is a

controversat

Suggestion

controversial

controversy

subject and there are doctors who disapprove

this

kind of therapy

Accept space

they said that not only do not cure the illness but can damage the patient health

Accept space

For example

, alternative

medicine

can mask some symptoms and can change the

diagnostic

Suggestion

diagnosis

Accept space

However pharmaceutical

Accept comma addition

However, pharmaceutical

drugs are preferred by doctors because they know how to use them and to control the side effects.

On the other hand

alternative

medicine

is preferred by most of us and in the history of

medicine

are many causes who

was cured

Suggestion

were cured

this

kind of therapy

Accept space

For example

, acupuncture can be useful in back pain or headache.For many of the

patients pharmaceutical

Accept comma addition

patients, pharmaceutical

drugs are very hard to support and have side effects

Accept space

To conclude, both of

this

plural of "this"

these

views are beneficial for our

heath

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

and I think that doctors should collaborate and use

alternatives

Suggestion

alternative

drugs in

pacinet

a basket (usually hooded) used as a baby's bed

bassinet

s treatments.

Submitted by mioara81.p on Mon Jun 08 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

217 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Improve your IELTS writing skills today

Unlimited Writing Checks: Practice and perfect your skills.
Detailed Error Analysis: Spot every mistake.
In-Built Grammar Checker: Say no to grammatical errors.
Personalized Suggestions: Know how to boost your score.
Progress Tracking: View your checked writing history.
Still thinking? We have a 14-day money-back guarantee. Take a leap of faith!

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
Some people believe that it is important for young children to attend school, while others think that they should spend more time with their family at home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Provide relevant examples and reasons to support your answer.
The importance of young children attending school is a topic of debate. On one hand, regular school attendance has been shown to have a positive impact on student achievement.
5.5
band
Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the information regarding politicians’ personal lives should not be shared in print media. This essay strongly agrees with this suggestion because publishing these details could be harmful to their families, and obtaining this type of information might require breaking the law.
4.5
band
The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram shows the steps involved in a company’s HR recruitment process. Overall, it explains the process for applications and selection of a successful candidate.
5
band
Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extend do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.
Some believe that clumping people together and having them engaged in group activities leads to enhanced intellectual growth. There seems to be a correlation between social engagement and motivation which in turn can lead to more occurrences of intellectual exertion, and by extension, improving intellectual skills. However, I beg to disagree because when it comes to the way our intellectual faculties chiefly develop and the nature of knowledge acquisition derived from our intellect, being active in a group activity is but a fraction of the whole process.
6.5
band
Successful sportsmen can earn a great deal more than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Famous athletes can gain higher payment than other important professions in society. It is argued by some people that it is not necessary to have someone earning a huge amount of money when there are a lot of people who do not have enough food to eat. However, others think it is extremely fair because sportsmen need to dedicate themselves and work inconsistently to achieve good performances.

Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who some time disagrees with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that it is important for young children to attend school, while others think that they should spend more time with their family at home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Provide relevant examples and reasons to support your answer.

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extend do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Successful sportsmen can earn a great deal more than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion