Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills Do you agree or disagree?

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Education plays a significant
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each and everyone. Few individual think that education level from primary to universities,
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is being consumed by learning
theory facts
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theory, facts
where as
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not sufficient
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on practical
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. I completely agree with
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view and it's true about our education system.
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with, education is mandatory for each and every
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pupil
to achieve their goals in the future.
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, in our teaching
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system, there
is a traditional method, as they teach only the theory concept.
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, In school and university, the experimental subjects
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as science and computer's, they teach in oral way without the
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of practical aspects.
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, teachers just make sure to teach the concept,
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consequently can
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consequently, can
cover the syllabus for exam point of view.
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, they teach
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lessons, but
students decline the practical skill of learning.
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, many teachers adopt a different method of teaching for students. They believe that, teaching
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the concept
practically requires a lot
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time but
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time, but
it remains on one mind quickly and easily.
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, by conducting a practical approach of teaching
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in the school and university, students learn quickly at the
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of practice. As they have spent multiple amount of
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while performing practice.
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, practical
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is always essential for the children.
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, helps in work profile and can work well. To sum up, practical
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is always preferred type of teaching the than of learning type
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exam skill. I agree the
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practice
is better than lesson key part of learning skills facts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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