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Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #government #lifestyle #individuals
In the contemporary world
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people have faced
myriad
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a myriad
 of
health
 ailments like obesity
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anorexia
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chronic illnesses due to several reasons.It is often argued that who should be responsible government or individual for mankind lives.
This
 essay will discourse the both views and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believed both
are
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were
 equally responsible for that. There are people who tend to believe that healthy lifestyle substantially depend on
individual person living style
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the individual person living style
 and eating habits.The elementary reason is due to sedentary living style
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people has faced numerous pressing problem related to
health
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For instance
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people are
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
prepared
 cars
instead
 of walk.The other reason is bad eating habits as folk love to eat adulterated food or fast food
instead
 of home meals that directly hamper their heath
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adversly
in an adverse manner
adversely
 weaken their metabolism
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immune system.So
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the inappropriate way of living styles of individual and
unhygeinic
 cuisines utterly affect the mass lives. The other people think that government need to provide miscellaneous
health
 care systems and heath education campaign to
general masses
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the general masses
.Authority
should spent
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should spend
proportion
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a proportion
 of their budget to
health
 care system.
For instance
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Australia government provides free
health
 services to
there
of them or themselves
their
 residents.
Secondly
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authority should
imparted
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impart
health
 education program to people as they are not conscious about
harmful affects
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the harmful effects
harmful effects
 of fatal diseases.Government must enlighten them about adversely affect of diseases. In conclusion
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I firmly believed that lifestyle of human totally reliant on both individuals as well as authority.
Submitted by Mannat Rs on

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