More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages or more disadvantages of such services?

Nowadays, the number of people who download and start using different kind of softwares and applications, which are helping them with a language they are unfamiliar with, is increasing.
However there
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However, there
are both pros and cons to decide to
this
and I will discuss some reasons why
this
idea has more disadvantages than advantages. Let's begin by looking at the advantages, that online wording app has. One of the main positives of
this
is, the fact that
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it could help people to communicate with each other in foreign countries, where the international speech which is English, is not spoken. Take France for an example, where a small fraction of people can speak another language as well,
besides
their native one.
Furthermore
, there is no need to hire a guide, so tourists can easily visit places by themselves and feel more secure now in terms of travel expenses. Turning to the other side of the argument, there are many negative aspects of using modern technology. Often, lack of internet access could cause serious problems,
moreover
, not all places have connection,
for example
if people decide to take a mountain tour. It is not a good idea to rely on these devices, as battery could run low, and that would make the communication hard while not having access to online translators. Another issue, is that these apps are not safe and secured, there is not authentic
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which could often lead to an incorrect translation. All things considered,
although
there are some positive parts of using these browsers, its disadvantages definitely outweigh the advantages if we do not use them with precautions.
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